☆°▪︎ A SENTIMENTAL SMILE (WIDE ACROSS THE DAYLIGHT) ▪︎°☆

I

remember

when

time

was

kind,

.

a

n

d

.

bright,

.

a

n

d

.

smiled

.

w

i

t

h

.

sunshine . . .

.

.

.

It

was

kind,

.

a

n

d

.

bright,

.

a

n

d

.

smiled

.

w

i

t

h

.

sunshine . . .

.

.

.

a

l

l

the

while . . .

.

.

.

 ~ all

.

t

h

e

.

while . . .

.

.

.

that

you

were

mine . . .

.

.

.

All

.

t

h

e

.

while . . .

.

.

.

All

.

t

h

e

.

while . . .

.

.

.

All

.

t

h

e

.

while . . .

.

.

.

that

you

were

mine . . .

.

.

.

i

t

smiled

.

w

I

t

h

.

sunshine . . .

.

.

.

It

smiled

.

w

i

t

h

.

sunshine . . .

.

.

.

It

smiled

.

w

i

t

h

.

sunshine . . .

.

.

.

It

smiled

.

w

i

t

h

.

sunshine . . .

.

.

.

even

when

silly

dreams

would

skip,

.

a

n

d

.

dance,

.

a

n

d

.

climb

sentimental

skies . . .

.

.

.

They

would

skip,

.

a

n

d

.

dance,

.

a

n

d

.

climb . . .

.

.

.

They

would

skip,

.

a

n

d

.

dance,

.

a

n

d

.

climb . . .

.

.

.

They

would

skip,

.

a

n

d

.

dance,

.

a

n

d

.

climb

sentimental

skies . . .

.

.

.

wide

across

.

t

h

e

.

daylight

.

o

f

.

all

which

could

.

g

o

.

right . . .

.

.

.

 ~ wide

across

.

t

h

e

.

daylight

.

o

f

.

all

which

could

.

g

o

.

right . . .

.

.

.

mile,

.

a

f

t

e

r

.

mile,

.

a

f

t

e

r

.

mile . . .

.

.

.

a

n

d

high,

.

a

f

t

e

r

.

high,

.

a

f

t

e

r

.

high . . .

.

.

.

wide

across

.

t

h

e

.

daylight . . .

.

.

.

wide

across

.

t

h

e

.

daylight . . .

.

.

.

wide

across

.

t

h

e

.

daylight . . .

.

.

.

o

f

all

which

could

.

g

o

.

right . . .

.

.

.

i

n

that

wonderful,

wondrous

life . . .

.

.

.

 ~ that

wonderful,

wondrous

life . . .

.

.

.

which

now

only

resides

.

i

n

.

mind . . .

.

.

.

It

now

resides

.

i

n

.

mind . . .

.

.

.

It

now

resides

.

i

n

.

mind . . .

.

.

.

It

now

resides

.

i

n

.

mind . . .

.

.

.

a

n

d

sighs . . .

.

.

.

I

remember

when

time

was

kind,

.

a

n

d

.

bright,

.

a

n

d

.

smiled

.

w

i

t

h

.

sunshine . . .

.

.

.

It

was

kind,

.

a

n

d

.

bright,

.

a

n

d

.

smiled

.

w

i

t

h

.

sunshine . . .

.

.

.

a

l

l

the

while . . .

.

.

.

 ~ all

.

t

h

e

.

while . . .

.

.

.

that

you

were

mine.

Reflection: 

This is a romance-themed poem where the affected party fondly looks back on a happy, romantic time with a special someone many years ago, but laments the passing of that romance and wonders if anything half as good will ever be experienced again. I wrote most of this poem by listening to “Moonglow and Theme from Picnic” by Morris Stoloff which I played repeatedly in the background to create the “moodset” for the poem. And it worked well.

If you listen to the song at low volume while reading this poem, you might better get the “feel” of it.

☆°▪︎ TO IGNITE A LIFE (A DETERMINED DRIVE) ▪︎°☆

To

climb

f

r

o

m

the

deepest,

darkest

decline . . .

.

.

.

To

try

even

when

badly

beat

a

n

d

barely

alive . . .

.

.

.

To

fight

f

o

r

every

inch

o

f

each

merciless

mile . . .

.

.

.

To

raise

a

head

high

i

n

the

daylight

w

i

t

h

a

strong

sense

o

f

pride . . .

.

.

.

This

i

s

the

life

I

will

ignite . . .

.

.

.

This

i

s

the

life

that

will

b

e

mine . . .

.

.

.

A

life

built

beyond

t

h

e

relentless

plight . . .

.

.

.

A

life

created

b

y

supreme

sacrifice . . .

.

.

.

A

life

fueled

b

y

determined

drive . . .

.

.

.

a

n

d

.

.

.

I

won’t

b

e

denied . . .

.

.

.

 ~ No, I

won’t

b

e

denied . . .

.

.

.

To

climb

f

r

o

m

the

deepest,

darkest

decline . . .

.

.

.

To

try

even

when

badly

beat

a

n

d

barely

alive . . .

.

.

.

To

fight

f

o

r

every

inch

o

f

each

merciless

mile . . .

.

.

.

To

raise

a

head

high

i

n

the

daylight

w

i

t

h

a

strong

sense

o

f

pride . . .

.

.

.

This

i

s

the

life

I

will

ignite . . .

.

.

.

This

i

s

the

life

that

will

b

e

mine.

Reflection:

There is a classic song that I just love (musically speaking) but I hate much of the lyrics (it’s a bit too blindly patriotic for my tastes). I thought, gosh, so many more people could relate to this song if the lyrics were changed – so, I took it upon myself to do just that. And the overwhelming positive response I received after publishing this poem resulted in it being one of my best loved poems of all time.

I felt that this poem was a very important poem for me to write. It had a lot of significance for my life but was more importantly written for those who struggle again and again in life. Victory is assured for those who stand firm and endure – it is only a question of focus, strength, and determination. May this poem inspire those who struggle to keep fighting.

I used the music from the song “The Impossible Dream” (I like both the Jack Jones and Frank Sinatra versions of this song – musically speaking), at low volume, to create the “moodset” while writing this poem. So, if you listen to the song at low volume while reading this poem, you might better get the “feel” of it.

☆°▪︎ REASONS TO RHYME (LAUGHING AT THE LINES) ▪︎°☆

The

inverted

smile

.

i

n

.

the

sky . . .

.

.

.

reminds

me

.

o

f

.

past

paradise . . .

.

.

.

 ~ it

reminds

me

.

o

f

.

past

paradise . . .

.

.

.

where

there

.

w

a

s

.

no

need

.

t

o

.

disguise,

.

o

r

.

search

.

f

o

r

.

lies . . .

.

.

.

There

.

w

a

s

.

no

need

.

t

o

.

disguise,

.

o

r

.

search

.

f

o

r

.

lies,

behind

.

e

v

e

r

y

.

where

.

a

n

d

.

why . . .

.

.

.

 ~ behind

.

e

v

e

r

y

.

where

.

a

n

d

.

why,

they

might

possibly

try

.

t

o

.

hide . . .

.

.

.

There

.

w

a

s

.

no

need

.

t

o

.

disguise . . .

.

.

.

There

.

w

a

s

.

no

need

.

t

o

.

disguise . . .

.

.

.

There

.

w

a

s

.

no

need

.

t

o

.

disguise . . .

.

.

.

o

r

search

.

f

o

r

.

lies . . .

.

.

.

i

n

past

paradise . . .

.

.

.

a

n

d

the

inverted

smile

.

i

n

.

the

sky . . .

.

.

.

reminds

me

.

o

f

.

that

time . . .

.

.

.

It

reminds

me

.

o

f

.

that

time . . .

.

.

.

It

reminds

me

.

o

f

.

that

time . . .

.

.

.

It

reminds

me

.

o

f

.

the

time . . .

.

.

.

when

I

.

.

could

love

.

a

n

d

.

like . . .

.

.

.

a

n

d

like

.

a

n

d

.

love . . .

.

.

.

both

inside

.

a

n

d

.

outside . . .

.

.

.

laughing

.

a

t

.

the

lines . . .

.

.

.

I

.

.

could

love

.

a

n

d

.

like . . .

.

.

.

a

n

d

like

.

a

n

d

.

love . . .

.

.

.

both

inside

.

a

n

d

.

outside . . .

.

.

.

laughing

.

a

t

.

the

lines . . .

.

.

.

I

would

laugh

.

a

t

.

the

lines . . .

.

.

.

I

would

laugh

.

a

t

.

the

lines . . .

.

.

.

I

would

laugh

.

a

t

.

the

lines . . .

.

.

.

a

n

d

find

reasons

.

t

o

.

rhyme

.

w

i

t

h

.

each

.

a

n

d

.

every

side . . .

.

.

.

 ~ I

would

find

reasons

.

t

o

.

rhyme

.

w

i

t

h

.

each

.

a

n

d

.

every

side . . .

.

.

.

i

n

past

paradise . . .

.

.

.

 ~ in

that

past

paradise

.

o

f

.

love

.

a

n

d

.

like . . .

.

.

.

a

n

d

like

.

a

n

d

.

love . . .

.

.

.

finding

reasons

.

t

o

.

rhyme . . .

.

.

.

finding

reasons

.

t

o

.

rhyme . . .

.

.

.

finding

reasons

.

t

o

.

rhyme . . .

.

.

.

w

i

t

h

each

a

n

d

every

side . . .

.

.

.

 ~ both

inside

.

a

n

d

.

outside . . .

.

.

.

 ~ both

inside

.

a

n

d

.

outside . . .

.

.

.

laughing

.

a

t

.

the

lines.

Reflection: This is a reflective poem where the contemplative party looks back on a lost but cherished time when everything seemed much more fun, less serious, and filled with a sense of freedom, exploration, and adventure. I wrote much of this poem by listening to various oldies songs at low volume – playing in the background.

☆°▪︎ UNTIL TODAY (A SMILE IN THE SEGUE) ▪︎°☆

I

thought

I

would

never

see

better

days . . .

.

.

.

I

thought

.

i

t

.

would

always

remain

.

t

h

i

s

.

way . . .

.

.

.

I

thought

I

would

never

see

better

days . . .

.

.

.

a

s

the

electric,

eclectic

colors

.

o

f

.

the

past

blurred

.

a

n

d

.

burned

.

i

n

t

o

.

embers

.

o

f

.

gray . . .

.

.

.

They

blurred

.

a

n

d

.

burned . . .

.

.

.

They

blurred

.

a

n

d

.

burned . . .

.

.

.

They

blurred

.

a

n

d

.

burned . . .

.

.

.

i

n

t

o

embers

.

o

f

.

gray . . .

.

.

.

a

n

d

I

thought

.

i

t

.

would

always

remain

.

t

h

i

s

.

way . . .

.

.

.

 ~ I

thought

.

i

t

.

would

always

remain

.

t

h

i

s

.

way . . .

.

.

.

a

n

d

that

I

would

never

.

s

e

e

.

better

days . . .

.

.

.

I

thought

I

would

never

.

s

e

e

.

better

days . . .

.

.

.

I

thought

I

would

never

.

s

e

e

.

better

days . . .

.

.

.

I

thought

I

would

never

.

s

e

e

.

better

days . . .

.

.

.

u

n

t

i

l

today . . .

.

.

.

 ~ until

today

when

a

face

without

a

name . . .

.

.

.

sent

a

smile

.

o

f

.

playful

grace,

.

.

.

embrace,

.

.

.

a

n

d

escape

my

way . . .

.

.

.

saying

.

i

n

.

the

segue . . .

.

.

.

that

everything

would

.

b

e

.

okay . . .

.

.

.

 ~ everything

would

.

b

e

.

okay . . .

.

.

.

said

a

smile

.

i

n

.

the

segue . . .

.

.

.

erasing

.

t

h

e

.

parade

.

o

f

.

blame . . .

.

.

.

a

n

d

pain . . .

.

.

.

a

n

d

shame . . .

.

.

.

ever

pacing

.

i

n

.

the

shade . . .

.

.

.

 ~ ever

pacing

.

i

n

.

the

shade . . .

.

.

.

o

f

yesterday.

Reflection: This is an inspiration/hope-themed poem where an unexpected brighter turn in life happens after someone offers the gift of a smile. Sometimes that’s all it takes to lift another’s spirits and improve perspective. So, smile often.

I wrote most of this poem by listening to “Chances Are” by Johnny Mathis and “I Love How You Love Me” by The Paris Sisters – which I played repeatedly in the background to create the “moodset” for the poem. And they worked well. If you listen to these songs at low volume while reading this poem, you might better get the “feel” of it.

☆°▪︎ DEEP INTO THE REACH (I YEARN) ▪︎°☆

I

yearn

.

d

e

e

p

.

into

.

t

h

e

.

reach . . .

.

.

.

 ~ I

yearn . . .

.

.

.

I

yearn

far

beyond

the

dawn . . .

.

.

.

 ~ I

yearn . . .

.

.

.

I

yearn

.

f

o

r

.

less . . .

.

.

.

I

yearn

.

f

o

r

.

more . . .

.

.

.

I

yearn

.

f

o

r

.

what

.

l

i

e

s

.

beyond

.

t

h

e

.

shore . . .

.

.

.

 ~ I

yearn

.

f

o

r

.

what

.

l

i

e

s

.

beyond

.

t

h

e

.

shore . . .

.

.

.

Beyond

.

t

h

e

.

shore

there

is

.

s

o

.

much

more . . .

.

.

.

Beyond

.

t

h

e

.

shore

there

.

i

s

.

much

.

t

o

.

explore . . .

.

.

.

There

.

i

s

.

much

.

t

o

.

explore . . .

.

.

.

There

.

i

s

.

much

.

t

o

.

explore . . .

.

.

.

There

.

i

s

.

much

.

t

o

.

explore . . .

.

.

.

beyond

.

t

h

e

.

shore . . .

.

.

.

 ~ beyond

.

t

h

e

.

shore

.

t

h

a

t

.

roars

.

a

n

d

.

pours . . .

.

.

.

It

roars

.

a

n

d

.

pours . . .

.

.

.

It

roars

.

a

n

d

.

pours . . .

.

.

.

It

roars

.

a

n

d

.

pours . . .

.

.

.

a

n

d

implores . . .

.

.

.

s

o

I

yearn . . .

.

.

.

I

yearn

.

d

e

e

p

.

into

.

t

h

e

.

reach . . .

.

.

.

I

yearn

.

d

e

e

p

.

into

.

t

h

e

.

reach . . .

.

.

.

I

yearn

.

d

e

e

p

.

into

.

t

h

e

.

reach . . .

.

.

.

 ~ I

yearn.

Reflection: This is a personal struggle-themed poem where the affected party restlessly seeks and wants but cannot seem to find a way to satisfy that hunger. I wrote most of this poem by listening to “Nights in White Satin” by The Moody Blues which I played repeatedly in the background to create the “moodset” for the poem. And it worked well. If you listen to the song at low volume while reading this poem, you might better get the “feel” of it.

☆°▪︎ TO THE MOON (I MOVED YOU) ▪︎°☆

I

merged

.

w

i

t

h

.

the

mood . . .

.

.

.

I

merged

.

w

i

t

h

.

the

mood . . .

.

.

.

I

merged

.

w

i

t

h

.

the

mood . . .

.

.

.

a

n

d

moved

you

.

t

o

.

the

moon . . .

.

.

.

 ~ I

moved

you

.

t

o

.

the

moon . . .

.

.

.

i

n

the

rapture

.

o

f

.

that

room . . .

.

.

.

 ~ in

.

t

h

e

.

rapture

.

o

f

.

that

room . . .

.

.

.

where

.

t

h

e

.

wants,

words,

.

a

n

d

.

whispers

brewed . . .

.

.

.

The

wants,

words,

.

a

n

d

.

whispers

brewed . . .

.

.

.

i

n

the

rapture

.

o

f

.

that

room . . .

.

.

.

w

i

t

h

the

movements

smooth . . .

.

.

.

a

n

d

the

new

.

i

n

.

bloom . . .

.

.

.

The

new

.

w

a

s

.

in

bloom . . .

.

.

.

The

new

.

w

a

s

.

in

bloom . . .

.

.

.

The

new

.

w

a

s

.

in

bloom . . .

.

.

.

when

I

merged

.

w

i

t

h

.

the

mood . . .

.

.

.

 ~ when

I

merged

.

w

i

t

h

.

the

mood . . .

.

.

.

a

n

d

moved

you

.

t

o

.

the

moon.

Reflection: 

This is a romance-themed poem where the contemplator fondly looks back on a special, romantic experience. I wrote most of this poem by listening to “My One and Only Love” by James Sanborn which I played repeatedly in the background to create the “moodset” for the poem. And it worked well. If you listen to the song at low volume while reading this poem, you might better get the “feel” of it.

☆°▪︎ TO BECOME ANOTHER ▪︎°☆

I

.

w

a

s

.

one,

.

a

n

d

.

became

another . . .

.

.

.

I

became

another . . .

.

.

.

a

n

d

then

another . . .

.

.

.

a

n

d

then

another . . .

.

.

.

a

n

d

then

another . . .

.

.

.

u

n

t

i

l

all

.

o

f

.

the

warmth

.

a

n

d

.

colors

.

.

f

r

o

m

.

.

all

.

t

h

e

.

others

I

explored

.

a

n

d

.

loved

before . . .

.

.

.

 ~ from

all

.

t

h

e

.

others

I

explored

.

a

n

d

.

loved

before . . .

.

.

.

poured

upon

.

t

h

e

future

shores . . .

.

.

.

They

poured

upon

t

h

e

future

shores . . .

.

.

.

They

poured

upon

t

h

e

future

shores . . .

.

.

.

They

poured

upon

t

h

e

future

shores . . .

.

.

.

o

f

all

I

aspired

.

t

o

.

become

.

a

n

d

.

more . . .

.

.

.

s

o

I

.

w

a

s

.

one,

.

a

n

d

.

became

another . . .

.

.

.

I

became

another . . .

.

.

.

a

n

d

then

another . . .

.

.

.

a

n

d

then

another . . .

.

.

.

a

n

d

then

another . . .

.

.

.

u

n

t

i

l

I

absorbed

each,

.

a

n

d

.

all

.

o

f

.

the

warmth

.

a

n

d

.

colors . . .

.

.

.

I

absorbed

each,

.

a

n

d

.

all . . .

.

.

.

I

absorbed

each,

.

a

n

d

.

all . . .

.

.

.

I

absorbed

each,

.

a

n

d

.

all

o

f

the

warmth

.

a

n

d

.

colors . . .

.

.

.

f

r

o

m

all

.

t

h

e

.

others

I

explored

.

a

n

d

loved

before.

Reflection: This is a reflection-themed poem where the contemplator looks back on and appreciates all those who influenced and contributed to the person he or she has become today. I wrote this poem by listening to “From the Beginning” by Emerson, Lake, and Palmer which I played repeatedly in the background to create the “moodset” for the poem. And it worked well. If you listen to the song at low volume while reading this poem, you might better get the “feel” of it.

☆°▪︎ REGRET SINGS RELENTLESSLY (THE HAUNTING TUNES OF TRUTH) ▪︎°☆

I

achieved

my

dream . . .

.

.

.

a

n

d

you

achieved

your

dream . . .

.

.

.

b

u

t

it’s

not

nearly

a

s

sweet

a

s

initially

seemed . . .

.

.

.

not

nearly

a

s

sweet . . .

.

.

.

not

nearly

a

s

sweet . . .

.

.

.

not

nearly

a

s

sweet

a

s

initially

seemed . . .

.

.

.

f

o

r

I

am

here . . .

.

.

.

a

n

d

you

are

there . . .

.

.

.

w

i

t

h

accum

ulating

time

a

n

d

distance

between . . .

.

.

.

time

a

n

d

distance . . .

.

.

.

a

n

d

distance

a

n

d

time . . .

.

.

.

were

all

the

rewards

w

e

would

find . . .

.

.

.

f

r

o

m

all

o

f

that

romance,

a

n

d

rapture,

a

n

d

rhyme . . .

.

.

.

time

a

n

d

distance . . .

.

.

.

a

n

d

distance

a

n

d

time . . .

.

.

.

dimming

t

h

e

days

gone

by . . .

.

.

.

dimming . . .

.

.

.

dimming . . .

.

.

.

dimming . . .

.

.

.

t

h

e

days

gone

by . . .

.

.

.

f

r

o

m

all

o

f

that

romance,

a

n

d

rapture,

a

n

d

rhyme . . .

.

.

.

before

w

e

pursued

those

dreams

i

n

our

youth . . .

.

.

.

not

knowing

how

much

w

e

might

lose . . .

.

.

.

 ~ not

knowing

how

much

w

e

might

lose . . .

.

.

.

f

o

r

regret

sings

relent

lessly,

the

most

haunting

tunes

o

f

truth . . .

.

.

.

Regret

sings

relent

lessly . . .

.

.

.

Regret

sings

relent

lessly . . .

.

.

.

Regret

sings

relent

lessly . . .

.

.

.

t

h

e

most

haunting

tunes

o

f

truth . . .

.

.

.

f

o

r

it’s

not

achieve

ment

o

f

the

goal

that

fills

the

soul . . .

.

.

.

It’s

not

achieve

ment

o

f

the

goal . . .

.

.

.

It’s

not

achieve

ment

o

f

the

goal . . .

.

.

.

It’s

not

achieve

ment

o

f

the

goal . . .

.

.

.

that

fills

the

soul . . .

.

.

.

b

u

t

who

i

s

with

you

when

y

o

u

go . . .

.

.

.

a

n

d

who

i

s

with

you

where

y

o

u

go . . .

.

.

.

a

n

d

who

i

s

with

you

a

t

the

end

o

f

that

road.

Reflection: This poem was largely inspired by the ending of “La La Land” where actress Emma Stone looks at Ryan Gosling playing the piano who both have separate new lives (especially her with a husband and child) and shares a secret smile with him for the times gone by that her husband/child know nothing about. It was a great moment in the movie.

☆°▪︎ THE ARTIST IN THE SKY ▪︎°☆

The

artist

.

i

n

.

the

sky

paints

a

passing,

pleasure

paradise . . .

.

.

.

The

artist

.

i

n

.

the

sky

tells

.

m

e

.

today

.

w

i

l

l

.

smile

.

s

o

.

wide

.

.

a

n

d

.

.

be

.

s

o

.

bright . . .

.

.

.

The

artist

.

i

n

.

the

sky

makes

even

.

t

h

e

.

cold

.

a

n

d

.

contrite

seem

warm

.

a

n

d

.

kind . . .

.

.

.

The

artist

.

i

n

.

the

sky . . .

.

.

.

The

artist

.

i

n

.

the

sky . . .

.

.

.

resides

solely

.

i

n

.

my

mind.

Reflection: This is a simple reflection-themed poem.

☆°▪︎ SUPERFICIAL SUNSHINE (I WOULD CLIMB THE SKIES) ▪︎°☆

I

loved

.

y

o

u

.

more . . .

.

.

.

I

loved

.

y

o

u

.

more . . .

.

.

.

I

loved

.

y

o

u

.

more . . .

.

.

.

than

anyone . . .

.

.

.

than

anywhere . . .

.

.

.

than

anything . . .

.

.

.

before . . .

.

.

.

I

loved

.

y

o

u

.

more . . .

.

.

.

I

loved

.

y

o

u

.

more . . .

.

.

.

than

anyone . . .

.

.

.

than

anywhere . . .

.

.

.

than

anything . . .

.

.

.

before . . .

.

.

.

f

o

r

I

would

climb

.

i

n

t

o

.

the

highs

.

o

f

.

even

.

t

h

e

.

darkest,

.

d

e

e

p

e

s

t

.

dismal

skies . . .

.

.

.

I

would

climb

.

i

n

t

o

.

the

highs . . .

.

.

.

I

would

climb

.

i

n

t

o

.

the

highs . . .

.

.

.

I

would

climb

.

i

n

t

o

.

the

highs

.

o

f

.

even

.

t

h

e

.

darkest,

.

d

e

e

p

e

s

t

.

dismal

skies . . .

.

.

.

mile,

after

mile,

after

mile,

after

mile . . .

.

.

.

time,

after

time,

after

time,

after

time . . .

.

.

.

I

would

climb . . .

.

.

.

I

would

climb . . .

.

.

.

I

would

climb . . .

.

.

.

f

o

r

those

smiling

lies . . .

.

.

.

I

would

climb

.

i

n

t

o

.

the

sighs . . .

.

.

.

o

f

superficial

sunshine . . .

.

.

.

I

would

climb

.

i

n

t

o

.

the

sighs . . .

.

.

.

I

would

climb

.

i

n

t

o

.

the

sighs . . .

.

.

.

I

would

climb

.

i

n

t

o

.

the

sighs . . .

.

.

.

o

f

superficial

sunshine . . .

.

.

.

day,

after

night,

after

day . . .

.

.

.

night,

after

day,

after

night . . .

.

.

.

even

during

those

times

when

I

waited

.

o

n

.

stand-by . . .

.

.

.

I

would

climb

.

f

o

r

.

those

lies . . .

.

.

.

I

would

climb

.

f

o

r

.

those

lies . . .

.

.

.

I

would

climb

.

f

o

r

.

the

lies,

that

smile,

behind

blinding

aisles . . .

.

.

.

 ~ they

smile

behind

blinding

aisles . . .

.

.

.

that

design

a

life

full

.

o

f

.

wintertime . . .

.

.

.

 ~ they

design

a

life

full

.

o

f

.

wintertime . . .

.

.

.

which

slides,

.

a

n

d

.

slips,

.

a

n

d

.

slides . . .

.

.

.

 ~ it

slides,

.

a

n

d

.

slips,

.

a

n

d

.

slides . . .

.

.

.

b

u

t

still

likes

.

t

o

.

climb . . .

.

.

.

It

still

likes

.

t

o

.

climb . . .

.

.

.

It

still

likes

.

t

o

.

climb . . .

.

.

.

It

still

likes

.

t

o

.

climb . . .

.

.

.

into

.

t

h

e

.

highs . . .

.

.

.

into

.

t

h

e

.

lies . . .

.

.

.

a

n

d

into

.

t

h

e

.

sighs . . .

.

.

.

o

f

superficial

sunshine.

Reflection: This is a personal struggle-themed poem where the affected party has an addiction problem which he/she cannot seem to overcome. Part of the problem is that he/she focuses more on the “fun” and “excitement” of the more appetizing moments of the initial experience instead of the stress, anxiety, pain, and damage it causes after those initial, appetizing moments fade. I started thinking about how a love of drugs or addictions could be similar to love in a relationship and wrote the poem starting out with this idea in mind. I wrote this poem by listening to “Medicine” by Gus Dapperton which I played repeatedly in the background at low volume to create the “moodset” for the poem. And it worked well. If you listen to the song at low volume while reading this poem, you might better get the “feel” of it.